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Bill Adler's avatar

You squeezed a lot of terror in a small space. Terrific story.

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

That's high praise from you. Thank you!

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Connie Earhart's avatar

You havean amazing imagination 😍

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

Maybe I'm just a little crazy! πŸ€ͺπŸ˜‰

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Connie Earhart's avatar

My kind of crazy 😁

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Mark Starlin's avatar

I liked the "check for shadows" bit. It's funny how people say "we have to leave Earth to insure human survival" but then all the aliens we encounter are killers who want to destroy us and take our planet. πŸ˜‰

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

True. These really aren't aliens. They're alternate universe humans.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Even worse!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Wow! I didn’t see that coming. This was fun to read!

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

Thank you! It's another kind of out there story!

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