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Connie Earhart's avatar

What a wonderful story, I'm glad Ray and Ellen stayed in touch and supported each other. Thanks, Dascha.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Glad you enjoyed it, Connie!

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Laura's avatar

Wow!! What a great story, Dascha. Many homecomings can be painful, many reasons why. You captured the essence of the pain that not even the beauty or the love of family could erase.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, Laura!

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Barb's avatar

Great beginning of closure ~ healing and a beginning of a new era for Ellen and Ray. Sounds like a novel, not a short story. Enticing picture.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

So many sorry stories could be novels. If only I had the time and energy to write them!

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