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Annelise Lords's avatar

I always wanted my own island, but having your own world sounds interesting. Lol. I wonder.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I think the cost is pretty high! But if you could have it under ideal circumstances? Interesting indeed!

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Justin Deming's avatar

Those twists were so much fun. Great story, Dascha. Loved it!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

It is a bit twisty! 😉

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Jason McBride's avatar

I love this story and have been thinking about it since yesterday. I may never look at throwing up the same way again!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

🤣 It's admittedly pretty weird radar. Right up your weirdo alley!

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Laura's avatar

That was a surprise!! Well done 😁

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Definitely not what the opening suggested! 😉

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Mark Starlin's avatar

I really enjoyed this one. Very imaginative. 🤓

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

This is great. Maybe your best. Fantastic twists and imagery

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Jimmy! High praise. 🙂

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Connie Earhart's avatar

Dascha! Wow, your imagination is on hyper drive! Yay, love this story!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, Connie! 🙂

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