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Really neat story and images, Dascha. The overall concept is hopeful and inspiring!

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Thanks Justin!

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I agree with Barb, and i love that Namor wants to share power!

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Thanks Connie. Looking at the story with fresh eyes, I can see the confusion. Perhaps i should have just called the land Everwhen. 😊

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I liked the concept of the story. I was confused in the beginning with who Immer was. I thought it was a king or queen. We had Namor, Immer, and Esan to sort out. Knowing Immer was the kingdom on reread the story made more sense.

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Thanks, Barb. That's great feedback. Sometimes, because I know what's going on, I miss that something might be confusing to readers.

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A joy shared is doubled, a burden shared is halved. We so easily share our joy but so often feel we must carry our burdens alone. A story of wisdom and hope 💕

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Thanks, Laura. And yes we tend to be far more willing to share joy than burdens.

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