I liked the concept of the story. I was confused in the beginning with who Immer was. I thought it was a king or queen. We had Namor, Immer, and Esan to sort out. Knowing Immer was the kingdom on reread the story made more sense.
A joy shared is doubled, a burden shared is halved. We so easily share our joy but so often feel we must carry our burdens alone. A story of wisdom and hope 💕
Really neat story and images, Dascha. The overall concept is hopeful and inspiring!
Thanks Justin!
I agree with Barb, and i love that Namor wants to share power!
Thanks Connie. Looking at the story with fresh eyes, I can see the confusion. Perhaps i should have just called the land Everwhen. 😊
I liked the concept of the story. I was confused in the beginning with who Immer was. I thought it was a king or queen. We had Namor, Immer, and Esan to sort out. Knowing Immer was the kingdom on reread the story made more sense.
Thanks, Barb. That's great feedback. Sometimes, because I know what's going on, I miss that something might be confusing to readers.
A joy shared is doubled, a burden shared is halved. We so easily share our joy but so often feel we must carry our burdens alone. A story of wisdom and hope 💕
Thanks, Laura. And yes we tend to be far more willing to share joy than burdens.