I really like this story. Need became greed. Is that not the time we are in. So many tied to needing what they desire and filled with knowledge rather than wisdom. I try to remember what is important but that doesn't mean I always have my priorities in the right order. I will remember these words for a very long time to come. Again, as always, well done.
I really like this story. Need became greed. Is that not the time we are in. So many tied to needing what they desire and filled with knowledge rather than wisdom. I try to remember what is important but that doesn't mean I always have my priorities in the right order. I will remember these words for a very long time to come. Again, as always, well done.
Thank you! I do feel this is the time we are living in! The story reflects that for me. Obviously for you too! 😊
This is a super creative story.
Thank you, Bill! I was terribly sleep deprived when I wrote it. I got no sleep last night. Maybe that makes this a good writing day?
Disturbing for sure! Parallel universe? There's beauty here too.
There's a hefty dollop of our universe, with our modern day robber barons. Thankfully, we're missing the creepy gods...I think.
Wow! This is a haunting story. It’s going to stay with me for a long time.
That's a good thing? Not sure it this one has comic potential... there's more exposition than action.
It’s definitely a good thing. I think it could make a good comic. I’m going to think about the mechanics of that.
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Love this. It is chilling.
Thanks, Ana.
Humanity is actually sitting on the edge of the knife and it's turning slowly.
I agree. I have to admit that the current situation was in my mind as I wrote this.