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Bill Adler's avatar

Look Up is a fulfilling story.

Justin Deming's avatar

Beautifully written!

Laura's avatar

This is exactly how I felt. I didn't envision it as a new world but as a wonder, not knowing what I'd see, not knowing what was drawing my eyes to look up. So well done!

Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I'm so glad I captured the feel of your prompt!

Mark Starlin's avatar

Wonderful, Dascha. One of your best, in my opinion.

Jason McBride's avatar

Love this!

Connie Earhart's avatar

I was surprised, as I went all spiritual at first 😁

Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

It is spiritual, in a way. Just not in a traditional sense. This person is connecting with something far more vast than themselves.

Kim Smyth's avatar

I love the direction that went! Great story!

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