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Ana Tirolese's avatar

I'm enjoying Coke-Zero-Jill. I hope she has more adventures.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Jill's story is not done!

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Laura's avatar

I can't wait for the next installment 🥰

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Laura. I have no idea when that will happen, but there will be one.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Music teachers are nothing but trouble. 😉

Fun story, Dascha.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

You ought to know! 🤪 Thanks, Mark.

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Bill Adler's avatar

I like crime stories that make me laugh. This was lots of fun.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Annelise Lords's avatar

Funny and gggooooooddd! I love this piece.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you. Jill is so much fun to write.

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Kim Smyth's avatar

Loved this one! You need to write an entire book…or have you already?

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I haven't, but I really love Jill. I might write her a series of shorts and publish that as a book.

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Jason McBride's avatar

This was fun to read! I enjoyed watching the story unfold like a TV police procedural.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Jason. Have you read the first story, "The Coke Zero Killer"? It's a fun read too.

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