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Laura's avatar

I like the little comment from the ghost at the end. It made me smile 😊

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Cue the evil laugh! 🤣

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Laura's avatar

Yes!!

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Bill Adler's avatar

Scary in a small space -- I loved this story.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Bill!

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Connie Earhart's avatar

That'll teach him! Wonderful 🤣

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Kim Smyth's avatar

Yaaaassss!!

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Jason McBride's avatar

Love this! I love the range of your stories--the last one about the hippy who felt like an anachronism and then this ghost story--always a rewarding read

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, Jason. I guess eclectic readers make eclectic writers!

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Vinitha's avatar

This is scary! 😱😨

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Kim Smyth's avatar

Eeek! I love it! More, more!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Halloween week isn't that far away! I'd better get started writing more spooky stories.

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