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Loved this!

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Jill's first story! It's so much fun.

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This story really "popped." I'll take a humorous cop story over a "gritty" one any day.

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I'm so glad you liked it, Mark. It's one of my favorite stories!

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That was a fun read! I used to be a fan of Coke Zero myself, thinking it tastes more like the original Coke than anything on the market. Unfortunately, they changed the formula, and I really don’t drink sodas anymore anyway (unless I’m mixing a drink on occasion 😉)

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Glad you enjoyed it! I wrote this one probably a year and a half ago. I stopped drinking pop shortly thereafter. This is one of my favorite short stories. Jill will return in another tale sometime in Seotember or October. I don't remember when I teed that one up for.

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