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Justin Deming's avatar

Wow, Dascha. This story blew me away. How sad. It’s also incredibly beautiful that he was able to communicate and express his final message to Keisha.

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Connie Earhart's avatar

Really lovely, Dascha. This is resonating with me!

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

Thank you, Connie. I love it when my stories "connect."

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Excellent, Dascha. Sad, but excellent. One of your best.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

This is fantastic. Honestly, I don't think the last line is necessary but the story overall is stellar.

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Dascha Paylor πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸπŸ»β€β„'s avatar

I actually debated the last line, then decided to leave it.

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