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Jason McBride's avatar

Thanks for another mention! I loved this poetic prose self-portrait. The last line is the perfect ending!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

And so true! Though I do manage to lose myself and mostly put the editor away, it takes a while.

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Connie Earhart's avatar

Mine are Blue Too!!! It was a good little story, looking out from different blue eyes. Everyone has their own version 🤸‍♂️

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Laura's avatar

This is beautiful 💕

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, my friend.

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Connie Earhart's avatar

So many blue eyes 💝

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

My eyes are blue! But maybe they change depending on which one of me is in charge.

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Dana Bennett's avatar

I’m glad I read this AFTER the Dostoevsky question. This answers the other question much more fully. YES! Prose poem.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I didn't think, when I came across the Dostoevsky quote this morning that it tied in with this, but it does! Thanks for pointing the connection out, Dana.

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