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Barb's avatar

I enjoyed your haiku! Thanks.

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Jason McBride's avatar

I love all the haiku, but I’m especially taken with the way you used bioluminescence in the second line of the second poem!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Jason. I like the image of a butterfly as bioluminescent lace. 😊

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Jason McBride's avatar

* I meant bioluminescent. Damn autocorrect

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Autocorrect gets me every time!

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Laura's avatar

Lovely. Seeds of hope, dreams abound. ❤️

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, Laura those seeds keep me going!

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