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Justin Deming's avatar

Loved it then and I still do now! Great story, Dascha.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Justin. You know this story made me fall in love with ultra-short fiction. Your Friday Fix was my introduction. I'll always be grateful to you for that.

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Justin Deming's avatar

Thanks for the kind words! It makes the whole journey and process worthwhile. 😊

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Bill Adler's avatar

Powerful, short fiction. I love it.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thank you, Bill. This one remains one of my favorites.

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Jo's avatar

I thoroughly enjoyed this.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

Thanks, Jo. Much appreciated. If this is the Jo I think it is, we should talk soon!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Memories...

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Jason McBride's avatar

I love this story! I used to write regularly on Medium, but I’ve been disappointed with the changes they’ve made over the past few years that worked against building communities of fiction readers and writers.

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

I left Medium when the kerfuffle over their changes to TOS happened. I discovered Substack shortly thereafter.

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