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Nov 24, 2022Liked by Dascha Paylor

I thought she wasn't and he was. I, too, liked the opening line!

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"Coleta dropped in on the Halloween party despite not having been invited." This is a great first sentence, and the story only got better from there.

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Oct 31, 2022Liked by Dascha Paylor

Gotcha! 😂

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I thought she was a vampire after the second paragraph and then questioned whether or not he was the remainder of the story. The ending still surprised me, though! Great job, Dascha!

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